periodically i'll call my dad "mom" or my mom "dad" solely because the things they say run together like yolks and yellow paint -- only half of it i can swallow.
so when you told me to shut up and take it, i obliged. because that's exactly what i do.
I really love this part of the second stanza: ". . . the things they say run together like yolks and yellow paint -- only half of it i can swallow." It just really struck me as completely brilliant.
Oh my goodness, I was just sitting there thinking "how are yolks and yellow paint different?" and suddenly it hit me -- one's edible and the other's not, so I wrote that in. I thought it was pretty nice, too. Thanks for noticing.
". . . the things
they say run together like
yolks and yellow paint --
only half of it i can
swallow."
It just really struck me as completely brilliant.